This is the first chapter of a series that I am currently Writing. Sorry to say, but I have to drop Sword Reincarnation, because it isn’t really good for the first chapter as well as it is to complicated for me to actually write as my first novel. I also wish for this newest web novel to be easier on me as I work 50-70 hours a week. This first chapter isn’t completed yet, but I wanted to post it to get a little critique before I start editing it and finishing the chapter. I don’t normally get a chance to write because of work but I hope this is better than my first post.
“Cix it is time to wake up.”
Hearing the shout from the door I open my eyes slightly. On the nightstand closest to the door, I can see my vine covered clock’s hands about to turn over to being five ‘o’ clock. Closing my eyes I go back to sleep, or at least I tried to when a banging on my door woke me entirely from my slumber.
“Cix I will count to ten and if you are not unlocking this door by the time I am done, I’ll have Alfred break it down again, one!”
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